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Brian Niemeier's avatar

The OP's estimate of a "thousand" similar books is charitable at best. It's just rare to see a botched vanity novel get this level of exposure. Which goes back to the content marketing you mentioned.

To be more specific, this is a perfect storm of zero barriers to entry, public schools maleducating new authors about what good writing is, and the dominance of "content is king" tactics on social media.

If you're a new writer working on your first novel, I implore you: Take a brutally honest look at your work and ask "Is my goal to produce and market a professional quality book, or am I seeking validation?" If the former, hire a professional editor. If the latter, all the best - but for your sake and the good of the whole industry, please do not publish the book.

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I read "Shadow of the Conquerer" last autumn. Well, technically I listened to it since I grabbed it with a free Audible token. I had hoped for a decently written fantasy story that would feature some of the Medieval knowledge that Shad's compiled over the years. What I got felt like a simultaneous knockoff of Warhammer Fantasy and The Wheel of Time with the grimdark elements ratcheted to 11. Don't get me wrong, I myself enjoy dark fantasy and yes, even some grimdark material when it's handled well. I've read some Warhammer 40k stories that I thoroughly enjoyed, but the reason I enjoyed them is because they understood how to balance the dark elements with characters that you want to read about.

Plenty of people harp on Daylen for plenty of good reasons. His often bitter and hostile nature makes him unpleasant to read about. His actions in the past are beyond reprehensible and the fact that he gets off with a "punishment" that doesn't even qualify as a slap on the wrist is a slap in the face to the audience. He's a Gary Stu - literally given his powers by an unseen force on the justification that his new life as a superhuman is somehow a punishment, his version of those powers is completely unique compared to everyone else, and he can figure them out just because the plot demands he reasons them out. All very valid reasons for disliking him and the book. My reasoning is admittedly simpler:

It's a bore. A cheap, trashy, forgetful bore. I legitimately forgot I read it until his video where he went over the reviews he got came out. It had no lasting impact on me whatsoever, and considering I actually enjoy and write dark fantasy myself, I'm the kind of reader who should've enjoyed something like that. I couldn't, there was simply too little of worth to latch onto because Shad doesn't understand the proper way to balance a dark fantasy story. Dark fantasy is nowhere near it's best when it's just grim and edgy and full of badass action. It's at its best when it puts the human elements of the story in the forefront - grit, struggle, love, hate, death, suffering, life, perseverance, and heroism. Even if the characters are dour and dark, they can and should still showcase heroic qualities. Daylen doesn't do that, he acts on a feeling of obligation and fights and kills with the same level of brutality he's described as having done when he was young, constantly forgetting the lessons he supposedly learned along the way.

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